**希望通过本贴给各位友台带来欢乐，和帮助。** **一、写在前面** （少年）包青天曾经说过：“**一些漫不经心的说话，将我疑惑解开**”。故在此首先特别鸣谢 @"YofoaStudio"#7 在我上篇帖子下的回复：“**呼号车贴也是业余无线电**”——这句话，是本贴的创作原点。笔者由此举一反三，大胆提出： 1、友台的设计作品，也是业余无线电； 2、不要钱的锐评，也是交易。 ——所以我并没有发错区，还请版主手下留情。（狗头） **二、划些重点** 1、**免费**：指不收费。 _笔者永久承诺：不仅不要钱，也不恰饭。不代设计、不印卡、不卖章；不卖服务也不卖产品。不会“收个成本价”帮你搞一搞，不接这个活儿也不指望这个过活；不存在任何显性/隐藏消费。_ 2、**锐评**：指保证言之有物，但不保证一定好听。 _我不会给你下“6”、“牛的”、“毒德大学”、“刀锐奶化”等高情商但毫无意义的灌水评价。如果你需要的是认同，请发QSL卡片展区，那儿就只会收到赞（不会收到锐评）。_ 3、**业余无线电相关**：指不锐评不相关的设计作品，比如请柬。 4、**个人**：指不锐评非个人的作品，比如你们协会/俱乐部的海报、年会邀请。 **三、评价原则** 如同前面“吹”的那样，笔者浸淫广告行业十数年，甲方乙方都干过，对上下游单位工作流程及工艺材质选择均熟稔于心。虽未曾具体担纲平面设计岗位，但终归看得多也做得多。此外，评价一个作品，是应当有具体标准和原则的。笔者会尽量理性中肯客观的给评价，同时秉承以下原则： 1、它有没有“**表达**”。 _笔者入行就被教导“先做对，再做好”——某个设计作品，它可以“表达得不好”，但它不能“根本没有表达”。_ 2、它有没有选取合适的“**文案/素材**”，进行表达。 _我意思是，总不能随便贴个白天，就去表达黑夜吧？_ 3、它有没有选取合适的“**技法**”，辅助表达。 _对，表达本身大于文案/素材；素材又大于技法。_ 4、**通盘**的**艺术/巧思/加工**考量。 _它在前述3点的基础上，（风格、颜色等）是进一步谋求了的统一，还是刻意制造了反差？_ 5、其他**基于上下游工作流及工艺材质**的建议。 _有的画面好看但不一定好用，有的设计好看但不一定好印，有的纸好印但不一定好写_ **四、君子协定** 1、不伤和气。 _虽说是锐评，但笔者作为一个成（中）年人，讲话是过脑子的； ——在此基础上如果还是冒犯到了，实属笔者情商堪忧，请相信我的本意并不是伤害友台的感情。_ 2、文无第一。 _1000个人心中有1000个莎士比亚，笔者不是非要跟你分个高下。_ 3、山外有山，人外有人。 _尽管笔者前面自吹强如詹姆斯/杜兰特；但真实水平终归是“小区级”的，而非“世界级”的。不然我就参加奥运会去了，害搁这半夜发啥贴呢？！_ 4、每位友台、每个作品，原则上只评价一次。 5、你杠，就是你对！——笔者先怂为敬。当你读完并认同楼上的所有“叠甲”，并仍然决定掏出你的作品，给我上点强度；那就来吧，掏出你的活儿。

**【0923置顶更新】**： 1、为了让大家 DIY 时更得心应手，已将CRAC Logo 的原版（CDR 格式）、转置（AI 格式）、导出（ PNG 格式）一并上传。其中 PNG 格式全部导出的高分辨率 + 透明背景。并根据关键词：“圆形 / 棱形”、“带底色 / 不带底色”、“带框线 / 不带框线”，分为了共计 8 个版本。（如果这 8 个版本都不能满足你需求，那你一定会玩 AI 或 CDR，自己下源文件自己导去！） [传送门](https://pan.baidu.com/s/1FS_SE2GryhZHLn_z1KSZ_A?pwd=H8GE) [upl-image-preview url=https://storage.hamcq.cn/2024-06-14/1718376051-47278-5.png] 2、为避免回帖形成“自捞”的效果，导致本贴长期“霸占”论坛主页面。**现将锐评的周期划定为：每周集中回复1-2次。** （通俗来讲就是每3-5张图集中回复一次）感谢本贴开坑约仨月以来大家共同带来的欢乐，并一如既往欢迎大家来寻找欢乐，BH8GE敬上。

先把你狗头扒了（再次手动狗头）

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@"YofoaStudio"#p25583 “6”、“牛的”、“毒德大学”、“刀锐奶化” 我是高情商

@"YofoaStudio"#p25583 去年换了一张，评价一下：卡片有点薄🤪

@"BG5VLI"#p25591 特意选的200g的不然打字机塞不进去

@"BI1UDG-711"#p25590 你小子.jpg

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@"BI1UDG-711"#p25590 来晚了，既定腹稿被你小子先发了。怎么办，在线等挺急的。

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@"Miles"#p25599 加上“牛批”“666”“我的宝贝”可破

Free QSL cards and other personal designs related to amateur radio, such as those created for free peer-to-peer reviews.

Miles

BI1KBU
1. The orientation (horizontal or vertical) of the boards should be as consistent as possible. That is, either all boards should be horizontal, or all boards should be vertical, and not have a mix of both.
2, The table is very neat and organized. Are the borders and lines using a gradient color? Generally, it's not recommended to use gradient colors for borders or text. Otherwise, when printed, it might look like "printing error."
3. The lower-middle section is a bit too complex. The "wave" and "circle" elements seem to be doing separate things. My suggestion is to integrate and simplify them, creating the illusion of a "dog running towards a wave," which would suffice. Remove everything else.

Miles

BA4TVY It's great, there are no problems. I would say, "doing subtraction" is the optimal solution.

Miles

BG2MXJ
Back:
1. Emmm, firstly, I personally don't really like the Chinese pixel font; it feels a bit "stylistically driven at the expense of readability." You might have noticed this too, which is why both the English and Chinese text in the table use a different font.
2、This double-line table frame looks very tiring and seems like... "mental pollution" hhh

From a cursory glance, it seems there are quite a few issues.
However, as a newcomer (due to limited familiarity with anime culture), I would like to ask the original poster: Where did this base image come from? What is it intended to represent? Is the main character on the left or the one on the right?
Please answer that question first, and then I can reply to you about how to change it.

Miles

BD8DQZ
Overall, it still has a very "retro" feel, similar to cards from around 2010._{(This is not a derogatory statement.)}
Back: D/M/Y can actually be equally wide. Or at least, D/M should be equally wide, and Y and other values like UTC/MHz should also be equally wide. This would result in a neat appearance.
(I haven't measured it, but visually, I can see that the width of "Date" is wider than "Month," while "Year" seems to have a different width.)
The top layer should be made using the same method as the bottom left corner, but applied to the right-hand side instead.

Miles

BH6SVA_AC3QU
Front: Directly copy the 1350th floor assignment, and do subtraction. This means keeping only one line of large text plus one line of small text; the large text should be the call sign, and the small text can be QTH or something else. The "large text + small text" line should pick a color from the middle of the "umbrella" in the image, and then create an effect similar to light.
Back: It should be neat and well-organized. Try to standardize the column width and line height as much as possible.

BH6SVA_AC3QU

Miles Received via copy
The problem is that I can't find a unit on the 1350th floor either...
The maximum is 1291.
~~Thank you for your hard work.~~🤣

Miles

Prologue
Front side:
1. I think both the "left bottom" and "right bottom" information can be deleted, and only the call sign should be retained.
2. Based on option 1, the most suitable position for displaying the call sign appears to be the lower-left (i.e., where the logo is currently located).
Back:
1. The "Fill in" section (i.e., the left side) doesn't necessarily need to be written in black; you could consider using a blue color, perhaps one that is slightly darker.
2、 The white text on the right side can also be made smaller, and then we can reconsider where to place it.
— Anyway, the main point of this is to make sure it doesn't obstruct "her" as much as possible, so we should stick to that.

Miles

BA4TAQ Unclear

Miles

BU2GQ
Personally, I think the front is the best place to display the call sign. Since the item is actually a 3D-printed one from online, and the presentation style can be more cartoonish; the back doesn't seem to have any issues.
Overall, it's quite innovative and represents a bold attempt to "directly abandon the logo," which I find commendable.

Miles

BU2GQ However, there's a minor issue on the back: you inserted a call sign under the "Card" in the first row. This causes the spacing between that line of text and the horizontal line below to be slightly greater than the spacing between the other horizontal line and the text.
Here, we can optimize it further by reconsidering the placement of the "Card" identifier; perhaps we can find a more suitable location.

Miles

BI4APF
Hmm, it's very difficult to assess; it's complex and has a high concentration.
My overall suggestion: Align all newly added content with the original document, paying particular attention to font consistency.
— In simpler terms: Try using Source Black and Source Sans Serif (both in bold).

Miles

Finally finished reviewing it! Yay!

If there are any missed comments from xdjm on the upper floor, please @ me or just re-post it.

Miles

BH6SVA_AC3QU
Mine.
Case 1: Floor number 1270Portal
Case 2: Floor number 611Portal

BD6JYO

BA4TAQ "The one I got from Chen Jin gave me a few pieces. I heard that he gives more to unusual crafts."

BH6SVA_AC3QU

Miles Thank you, original poster (喵)

BI9BSL

Miles Thank you for your guidance. It seems like the red box was caused by my drawing tool. I will standardize the font and underline, and I have already removed the texture in the previous modification.
Thank you for the insightful suggestion, 73.

YofoaStudio

Oh, it seems like the big boss has started a gradual update.

Miles

YofoaStudio "You can taste it, right?"

BI9DJV

BA4QNS Hello, could you please tell me what font was used for the words "@loniper" below the circular icon? I would appreciate it if you could share this information.

BA4RBX

umm, minimalist style

Miles

BA4RBX 我觉得挺好的，仨建议：
1、上下端的圆形点线可以考虑换成莫尔斯码，承载指定字母内容或呼号什么的。
（目的是加点巧思）
2、填写区的短划线“__”可以考虑换成长横线，或者拿掉。
（目的是看起来更整齐）
3、Date后面的MM/DD/YYYY/HH/MM其实可以拿掉。
（因为当你规范的填完，它其实就变成了个无用信息）

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